A shorter Supplemental Log could work if it focuses on a single plot, for example, the steps in identifying and resolving a problem. What you've written previously is a cluster of different things.
I suggest writing three or so of them with different approaches, then asking readers what they think.
Quicklife storytelling really requires a different focus than slowlife storytelling, because artificial intelligence perceives and moves through the world differently than animals do. Think about how that will influence what you want to write.
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Date: 2024-01-27 10:52 pm (UTC)I suggest writing three or so of them with different approaches, then asking readers what they think.
Quicklife storytelling really requires a different focus than slowlife storytelling, because artificial intelligence perceives and moves through the world differently than animals do. Think about how that will influence what you want to write.