Lovely. I like the idea of 'heartclasp' being such a physical metaphor, if that makes any sense. It took me a moment (and reading further in the text) to realize that the 1 inch taken at the beginning must have come closer to the middle of the heart rather than the end.
Thank you for sharing -- I quite enjoyed it, and you surprised in a wonderful way when you took the prompt in directions I hadn't consider.)
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Date: 2011-11-24 05:10 am (UTC)Thank you for sharing -- I quite enjoyed it, and you surprised in a wonderful way when you took the prompt in directions I hadn't consider.)