No, you also handled the parallels and puns well, creating different sections of the poem for each of several variations on the same phrase. I do that too, sometimes, and it's a very useful structural support for examining a complex idea from different angles.
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Re: prompt fill
Date: 2016-08-21 08:12 pm (UTC)