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dialecticdreamer ([personal profile] dialecticdreamer) wrote in [community profile] crowdfunding 2016-02-20 10:51 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL (freebie): "Zoe's Name Is Jesse"

I like the setup, LOVE the layers of development, but one thing continually threw me out of enjoying the poem.

What is an "enby"-- Bing made the problem worse when looking for a reference, USING quotes, because it kept changing the word to ENVY, which is probably the opposite of the intended connotation.
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